Tuesday, November 7, 2017
look at this!
Once Jackson was flying an airplane. Then he saw lots of boats it looked like a graveyard of boats . And he was wondering what happened to all the boats. There was no water he saw a deserts.
He was trying to look for his parents. Then he saw a cloud. The plane crashed and she had to run away because the plane blew up, it went bang !
He screams like a hooligan running down the thieves’ skeleton, which reminded me of a Dummy For walking a day she saw a Village . watch this
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What a wonderful phrase you have written describing boats looking like a 'graveyard of boats.' I have been trying to imagine what it sounds like when a hooligan screams. I would love to know more about your character named Jackson. Jackson sounds like he loves adventure. Do you think you will be writing some more adventures for Jackson. If you do I would love to read them.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.
Wow what a great imagination you have Toby. Lots of action and an exciting adventure. Look forward to hearing more about Jackson.
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