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Friday, August 24, 2018

The speech

2 comments:

  1. Hi Toby,

    What a great speech you wrote and delivered. I am proud of you for standing up in front of your class mates to tell them about the train. Were you nervous? You couldn't tell if you were nervous when you were speaking. What do you think you would do differently the next time we do speeches.
    I look forward to your next blog post.
    Mrs Taylor :)

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  2. Toby I thought you did a great job of your speech. You were nice and calm it was hard to hear all of it but what I heard was really great so proud of you. There was lots of noise in the back ground a wee tip I thought to help you is to maybe use a bigger voice next time if there is a lot of background noise so we can all hear your wonderful hard work put into your speech. Great job!!!

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