Kia ora Toby I liked the way you made your own name for your tennis ball. Had you thought about making your slide a bit longer? This reminds me of when I made my own tennis slide. Why did you make a tennis slide? Noho ora mai(from) Stanley
Kia Ora Toby, I really like the post on tennis balls. Maybe next time you could explain more the type of the tennis ball or write more words. Do you play tennis? I play tennis with Grey united 1 and my coach is Venessa and Vahghn. Noho Ora Mai (From) Honor
Kia Ora Toby I really like your slide about tennis balls. Maybe next time you could put more information in the slide. Do you play tennis? I don't play tennis but I do play rugby. Noho Ora Mai (from) Riley
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Kia ora Toby I liked the way you made your own name for your tennis ball. Had you thought about making your slide a bit longer? This reminds me of when I made my own tennis slide. Why did you make a tennis slide? Noho ora mai(from) Stanley
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Toby, I really like the post on tennis balls. Maybe next time you could explain more the type of the tennis ball or write more words. Do you play tennis? I play tennis with Grey united 1 and my coach is Venessa and Vahghn. Noho Ora Mai (From) Honor
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Toby I really like your slide about tennis balls. Maybe next time you could put more information in the slide. Do you play tennis? I don't play tennis but I do play rugby. Noho Ora Mai (from) Riley
ReplyDeleteHi Riley,
DeleteThanks for your comments. I will try and remember next time.
Toby