Monday, May 25, 2015
5 sentence challenge week 6
a train flying in the sky it was flying over school. It came down with my mum on the train. My mum picked me up.
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Toby I love your sentence! Very cool to have Mum come in a flying steam train to pick you up from school. :)
ReplyDeleteToby I love your sentence! Very cool to have Mum come in a flying steam train to pick you up from school. :)
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