Hi Toby this is Sanele a Year 6 from St Bernadette's. I like the way you put a clear text, for people who come to see your work. I thought it looked good with the background. Something you need to work on is to add more detail and information so people who come , can get hooked into your work. Also I was wondering if your piece of work was finished? Great job!
Hi Toby, My name is Dion and I'm a Year 6 from St. Bernadette's Primary School. I really liked how you made your piktochart very colourful because it really makes me smile. I also liked how you put lots of images to tell the audience who visits your blog. I really like your piktchart because it looks really amazing good job to you. I am really looking forward to seeing more from you because you do really good content. I would like to say is this piece of work finished? Maybe next time you could add a bit more detail to your piktochart?
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Hi Toby this is Sanele a Year 6 from St Bernadette's. I like the way you put a clear text, for people who come to see your work. I thought it looked good with the background. Something you need to work on is to add more detail and information so people who come , can get hooked into your work. Also I was wondering if your piece of work was finished? Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Toby, My name is Dion and I'm a Year 6 from St. Bernadette's Primary School. I really liked how you made your piktochart very colourful because it really makes me smile. I also liked how you put lots of images to tell the audience who visits your blog. I really like your piktchart because it looks really amazing good job to you. I am really looking forward to seeing more from you because you do really good content. I would like to say is this piece of work finished? Maybe next time you could add a bit more detail to your piktochart?
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